Scenes 5

1. 0:00Hook: the endless screen stareStaring at a screen all day? Your eyes have been focusing at the same distance for hours.Stick figure slouches in front of a glowing monitor rubbing tired eyes in exhaustion.
2. 0:06The Turn: introducing the ruleTry the twenty, twenty, twenty habit that eye care professionals often suggest.Stick figure looks up curiously as three clean numerical circles bounce into view overhead.
3. 0:10Action: looking into the distanceEvery twenty minutes, look at something about twenty feet away, like a window or the far wall.Stick figure swivels away from the laptop to gaze through a distant window at a green horizon.
4. 0:16Action: timer and blinkingHold your gaze there for twenty seconds, and remember to blink.Stick figure holds gaze outdoors as a circular timer fills and deliberately blinks in comfort.
5. 0:21Payoff and CTA: reminder and careSet a gentle reminder, and if your eyes keep troubling you, get them checked by a professional.Stick figure sets a bell reminder on the phone and nods toward an eye care clipboard.

Script 74 words

Staring at a screen all day? Your eyes have been focusing at the same distance for hours.

Try the twenty, twenty, twenty habit that eye care professionals often suggest.

Every twenty minutes, look at something about twenty feet away, like a window or the far wall.

Hold your gaze there for twenty seconds, and remember to blink.

Set a gentle reminder, and if your eyes keep troubling you, get them checked by a professional.

This is exactly what was pasted. The director turned it into 5 scenes.