Scenes 6

1. 0:00Hook: the rental checklistBefore you sign a rental agreement, check these five things.The stick figure pauses before signing a clipboard and holds up five fingers in warning.
2. 0:05Item 1: Water inspectionOne, water. Turn on every tap and check the pressure, at different times of day if you can.The stick figure twists a bathroom tap and monitors the fluctuating water stream next to a clock.
3. 0:12Item 2: Power and electrical testingTwo, power. Test every switch and socket, and ask what happens during a power cut.The stick figure flips a wall switch and plugs a phone in to verify the current.
4. 0:18Item 3: Wall inspectionThree, the walls. Damp patches and peeling paint usually mean a leak somewhere.The stick figure uses a magnifying glass to uncover a spreading damp patch on the wall.
5. 0:23Item 4: Lease agreement scrutinyFour, the agreement. Read the notice period, the deposit return terms, and who pays for repairs.The stick figure sits at a desk and highlights three critical clauses on a contract.
6. 0:30Item 5: Night inspection and takeawayFive, the neighbourhood. Visit at night too, and see how it feels. Ten minutes of checking can save a year of regret.The stick figure stands peacefully beneath a streetlamp at night, checking a wristwatch with a smile.

Script 94 words

Before you sign a rental agreement, check these five things.

One, water. Turn on every tap and check the pressure, at different times of day if you can.

Two, power. Test every switch and socket, and ask what happens during a power cut.

Three, the walls. Damp patches and peeling paint usually mean a leak somewhere.

Four, the agreement. Read the notice period, the deposit return terms, and who pays for repairs.

Five, the neighbourhood. Visit at night too, and see how it feels. Ten minutes of checking can save a year of regret.

This is exactly what was pasted. The director turned it into 6 scenes.